Chips and Cracks p30

14th Dec 2022, 12:00 AM in 2.2 Chips and Cracks
Chips and Cracks p30
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Author Notes:

Toadlett 14th Dec 2022, 12:00 AM
Toadlett
hands are difficult to draw

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PAGE 30 (4 panels)
1. this page arranged like a spread showing Vulp’s hand carving at the mask with the knife, but cut into wide panels as they progress, her hand moving to different points instead of overlapping gutters. So the mask is continuous but not her hand.
V (thoughts): the voice promised vengeance. I think I want that. But against who?
2. carving hand moving down a little, spotted with a little blood, a little shaky.
V (thoughts): against the gaps in my own memories? Or against who made them? Oh, oh this hurts. Fuck.
3. the carving shakier, show the chips at the edge of the mask erratic, V’s hand smeared with blood.
V (thoughts): what if I was always like this? Shitting hell, this is- Will you still want to help me, Briar?
4. blackness closing in, Vulpine’s hand dropping the knife as it scrapes sideways, chipping the mask.
SFX: CHCK!
V (thoughts): Why don’t you talk to me? Briar? Athenie? Tyto? Am I not enough? Am I not…
T: Vulpine!